jueves, 8 de octubre de 2015

News: Violence in Costa Rica







Violence in Costa Rica

Costa Rica is not anymore the happiest country around the world!! It has changed. The last social events that have recently happened have changed the way Ticos and others out of Costa Rica see our beautiful peace of land!! Murders, violence, crimes, rounds, accidents where licuor is the cause, are the news of every single day.

We have seen bad news since many time ago. No good news for us have been showing at news channels, only bad ones. We have already become witnesses of our misfortune, but, we have not react yet!! What are we waiting for? Maybe this is the question that everybody ask him/herself. No answers are in the air, no answers are into a simple book. We have lost our living way.

If everything goes like now, my lovely Costa Rica will be the worst country to live in Latin America. We have always lived into a big bubble of glass, but, it is time to wake up!! 

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